|
| The heart of your writing whilst sounding reasonable in the beginning, did not really work perfectly with me personally after some time. Someplace within the sentences you actually managed to make me a believer but just for a short while. I still have got a problem with your jumps in logic and one would do well to help fill in all those breaks. When you can accomplish that, I will undoubtedly be amazed. |
|
HOME | 게시판 | 질문게시판 
