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| The root of your writing whilst appearing agreeable at first, did not really settle properly with me after some time. Somewhere throughout the sentences you actually were able to make me a believer but just for a short while. I however have a problem with your leaps in logic and one would do nicely to help fill in those breaks. When you can accomplish that, I would surely be impressed. |
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