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| The heart of your writing whilst sounding agreeable in the beginning, did not really work properly with me personally after some time. Someplace throughout the paragraphs you were able to make me a believer but just for a very short while. I however have got a problem with your jumps in logic and you would do nicely to fill in all those gaps. If you can accomplish that, I would undoubtedly be impressed. |
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