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| The crux of your writing while appearing reasonable originally, did not really settle very well with me after some time. Somewhere throughout the paragraphs you actually managed to make me a believer but only for a short while. I nevertheless have a problem with your jumps in logic and one would do nicely to fill in all those gaps. If you can accomplish that, I could definitely end up being fascinated. |
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